Comments : Bleeding For You

  • 18 years ago

    by suzanne

    i can so relate to that !!!! its so amazing!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by yolanda

    great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by whisper

    hey thanks for cheackin out my poem and coomenting on it i love the poem alot i give it a five lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee

    wow...great poem...I totally understand this...thank you very much for the comment
    take care,
    Renee

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Jayneee

    your poem is so amazing. ive been writing a while now but none are as good as that! i can relate too- really i can. thaks for helping me stop and think about things . stay smiling, sam

  • 18 years ago

    by elizabeth

    I really like this. I have a poem called 'bleeding for you' too, very ironic. I really like this part:

    Bleeding out the memories
    Bleeding out the lies
    Bleeding out the feeling,

    It kind of wraps up the feelings of being set free from whatever pain is inside, with cutting. Once again this is a really good poem. Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    Great poem, you truly are talented! Hang in there and take care!
    Car

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Shannon Loter

    I really like this poem! good job

  • 18 years ago

    by foreverhappy

    Amazing poem! I can relate so much! You have excellent talent! Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Piper

    sorry if you need someone to talk to you can comment on one of my poems and i can send you a private message. just remember you don't have to cut yourself you just have to let your feelings come out by talking

    just comment if you want to talk

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel

    I wrote this when I was cutting, but I'm happy to say that I don't cut anymore.

  • 18 years ago

    by *Natalie*

    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ure poems relate to me sooo so so soooooooooooooooo much omg i love ure poems lol i read all of them!

  • 18 years ago

    by rbmo401

    Really good read. It sounds like some of my stuff. You should check out "Her Last Kiss" I think you'll find it along the same lines just at a dferent perpective.

  • 18 years ago

    by rbmo401

    very well written your a truly gifted poet and your only 13. What are they teaching kids in school now a days that make them that intellingent. Keep it up and I'll keep postins. Thanks for the read and the critique. rbmo401

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel

    I was just reading all these comments and I see that all of you like it lol. THanks for taking the time to read this, you all are amazing and talented writers!

    Much love
    Rachel

  • 18 years ago

    by DarkAngel9

    That was great! Very deep!Keep writting love your work!

  • 18 years ago

    by LOST iN LOVE

    loved this poem!good job!*hugs*
    xoxo
    <3Jess

  • 18 years ago

    by JL

    awesome job i esp liked
    "You don't know all the pain that's locked deep inside.
    Or how many tears my heart has cried."
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by destiny

    it's seriously great man...keep up your talent