Twelve moons within 25 days

by guyute   Jun 2, 2005


In the 25th minute into every sunset
children find birth and by twelve differn't zodiac signs these children welcome the earth

And as father times shoes get worn
into the oceans and into the sea
There gracious marine life is born
and to every cricket that sang out in verse

a new liquor has been drinkin
to hide the adolecent people from their own truths
and to watch emotions sinking
into disease and away from the real spirits
that understand the master's thinking
in a place called mother earth
but the ignorant don't want to hear it
And as we grow and we learn the song
we look back and wonder what was wrong
and realize the beauty we've missed
and the filth on our tongues all along

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    nice

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Beautiful write, my friend. I truly love your style. hugs, love, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    i enjoyed this one very good work :D 5

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    Your writing is on a deep level I can see some of what your trying to say but the rest is abit hazy. I think with abit more understanding of what your trying to say with out thinking the reader knows what going on this could be very profound. But alittle to far out of your normal reader's grasp...

  • 18 years ago

    by EoB

    Well..I didn't really understand this one...but I like the structure, once again...

    You have your very own way of writing , and that is very important...

    Hope you`ll keep on posting poems here..

    keep it up!

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