Wow!! great work!! definately keep it up! creative too! 5/5!

Well..I didn't really understand this one...but I like the structure, once again...

You have your very own way of writing , and that is very important...

Hope you`ll keep on posting poems here..

keep it up!

Your writing is on a deep level I can see some of what your trying to say but the rest is abit hazy. I think with abit more understanding of what your trying to say with out thinking the reader knows what going on this could be very profound. But alittle to far out of your normal reader's grasp...

i enjoyed this one very good work :D 5

Beautiful write, my friend. I truly love your style. hugs, love, Ann

nice