Comments : R.I.P

  • 13 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    That was so sad! I totally understand how you feel~ i can relate a lot ♥

  • 13 years ago

    by Cara McTired

    HOLY CRAP RYAN! YOu need a hug! i'm so sorry but this poem is doing so well. So i'm happy and sad for you!
    -Cara

  • 13 years ago

    by Jordan

    omg...this is so sad. I was told that a friend of mine died, and I grieved for a long time. And then out of no where I saw him...really. I talked to him and he lives in a town near by. But it still hurts sometimes when I think about it. He was shot and he was close to death and yet god had a plan. I think the same applies here. Things don't just happen, they're planned. Keep strong.

    Much Love,
    Jordan-Paige

  • 13 years ago

    by RachiBubbles

    awww, i understand ur poem very well, it was well writen and im soo so so sorry and i know how it feels well she wasn't in a crash she died bc she had cancer and loosing a best friend really sucks and makes u think what went wrong...keep up ur great work its awesome...(u should write a couple poems and dedicate them to him! i bet he will appreiciate it alot even tho u don't know what hes thinking but awesome) this is long srry..lol

  • 13 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Wow that is so sad! I know how it feels to lose someone so close to you at such a young age. I lost my twin sister at the age of 10. I wrote about it it's called At Peace. The family doesn't talk about it but I had to let it out. You wrote this poem so well I can feel your hurt! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 13 years ago

    by Solace

    I'm sorry for your loss I know it's hard.. Keep your head held high and keep writing... If you ever need to talk I'm always here. take care (always)) xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 13 years ago

    by **~xoxo~**

    Hey that was sooo sad im sorry about your loss... it is soo hard to lose someone you love... i have never lost a best friend but i have lost relatives it is not the same and probably not as painful but you will get through.... im really sorry... xoxo

  • 13 years ago

    by CynicxSincexBirth

    T.T

  • 13 years ago

    by xfAdInGxaWaYx

    It's a g8 poem Im sorry 4 da loss of ur friend

  • 13 years ago

    by Erinn

    Great poem!! 5/5 you should check out my poem "the first time" thanks!! keep writing!!

    XOXO
    erinn

  • 13 years ago

    by hannah morgan

    well riten.. ims orry for your lose... it hurts ino i lost my m8 of 12 yrs nd ino how much it hurts if you need to talk im here xx keep ya he dup and take care huni xx

  • 13 years ago

    by Rebecca

    OMG!!!!!! that was so cool and soo sad lol *hug*.....

  • 13 years ago

    by Erinn

    That was a great joy to read!! 5/5 great great great!!! keep writing! oh and plz check out all of my poems... theres only 5 but plz rate and comment thanks

    XOXO
    ~*Erinn*~

  • 13 years ago

    by anasha

    omg..that was really beuatiful..nd i dnt got no idea how u feel.,ur really strong man..i wudnt b able to do it..but dnt give up..u wander why god chooses some people to die..makes u think if everythin really does happen for a reason.i dnt kno..but i hope ur ok..im ur age..nd i wudv probly killed myself by now if i cudnt handle the pain..but dont do that..cos ur friend will b watching over u..nd he wants to keep it that way..hope ur ok darl..love anasha xoxo

  • 13 years ago

    by Vicissitude Of Fate

    OMG!im so sorry about your lost friend......im really sorry your poem kicks @$$ though and keep it up!

    ~mallory~*

  • 13 years ago

    by alyssa

    really good poem i love it and i know how you feel i have lost my grandfather my dad and my best friend killed him self 8 days ago. is u need to talk im here email me at woniga@aol.com or im me at woniga ok hang in there

    alyssa

  • 13 years ago

    by Laura

    i'm sorry that you lost a friend the closets thing to me losing a friend when she moved to Florida sorry again <3 laura

  • 13 years ago

    by Mariah

    I loved this poem. It's sad that he died. Stay strong and don't give up. Y'all will see each other again when its time. May GOD

  • 13 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    very touching, im sure he would have loved it. the pain eases with time. beleive it
    ~*Freak*~

  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsi

    I am so sorry for your loss, I know how it is to lose someone in an accident. I hope you are doing better!! Hang in there!! Great job!! 5/5