Comments : The Perfect Sacrifice

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    a m a z i n g.

    and i feel bad saying this is amazing...its such an understatement.
    you. are. brilliant.

  • 18 years ago

    by paulina.♥

    Beautiful. Keep writing.

    -Ice

  • 18 years ago

    by Shadows Collide

    Another great poem. Are all, of these from experience (you've had it pretty tough if so!) or do you just chose subjects that interest you?

    Hope they don't reflect your own emotions. All the best.

  • 18 years ago

    by CynicxSincexBirth

    wow. this is amazing. makes me wonder how long it took to be put together and perfected. very nicely done. i would greatly appreciate it if you could read and comment back on a poem of mine. tootles. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Nikki

    hey, this is really good i loved the emotion you put forth in it. I can relate to the pain.

  • 18 years ago

    by Rolo

    Brilliant is an obvious understatement. You are an amazing writer. 5/5..speechless.

  • 18 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    such an emotionally filled strong flowing poem! i loved this one! please keep writing and stay safe, strong, and healthy!
    luv
    kym

  • 18 years ago

    by ~* gifted little fallen~*

    wow that was deep, keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by inaudible confessions

    wow.... unbelieveable. this is such a great poem! you're very talented. keep writing.

  • Beautiful xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by sHaTtErEdMiStAkE

    This is an awesome poem... i like the different use of words in it.. completely beautiful...5/5 ttyl

    Maddy

  • 17 years ago

    by limp

    Iz a lil bit sh!t lyk bt i cn lyk past dat, da overused clichez n stuf duzent rly atrackt me 2 diz pes n hopfuli uv got better in tym overwize al yer poemz wil b crp.
    not rly iz gud m8.

  • 16 years ago

    by Absolute Broken Perfection

    That last line pulled it all together,
    absolutely. stunning. writing.