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MUAHAHAHAHAHA!

I like it. It'd be nice to see the story expanded, making it more vivid. But I love the "silent scream." It reminds me of myself in a way that I'm mostly silent and well...it reminds me of other and deeper things. Nice job!

Keep writing. You've got potential.

xxx

Hey mate I love this "Silent Screem" ,the title is so perfect for your story, the whole poem is perfect sad.

your style is my favourite.

much Respect,
Rua Francis.

Good poem keep it up