One could assume that you have at least considered using this poem as a song. Then again...all poems are songs and songs-poems.

Anyways, "I was following someone who was content to follow me"
That has to be my favorite part of the whole thing!

I've been reading all of your poems and I seem to be having troubles finding any errors in them. Nothing that needs to be changed and no suggestions. That shows me that you are truly a poet! A good one!

~*~Christina~*~

it is a song. I play in a ska type band, big eight piece thing.