Comments : The one

  • 12 years ago

    by cooldude900

    you are the only one for me pretty princess
    raaaaaaaawwwwwwr

  • 12 years ago

    by cooldude900

    hey dont take it as the one in the movie the one jetli lol

  • 12 years ago

    by Lauren

    gr8 poem! plz comment on mine! keep up da gud wurk!

  • 12 years ago

    by Julie

    WOW JAMES........Thats amazing hun...great work, I love it very much
    Love forever and always hun
    Love Julie
    XOXOX

  • 12 years ago

    by crissy abalos

    touching poem...luck gurl :) who is she?

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    Hey Sexy. Great job on the poem. Keep up the great work.

    Ashley

  • 12 years ago

    by lover girl

    thats a really good poem. keep up the good work

  • 12 years ago

    by Knee

    OK James that was awesome!!!!!!!!!
    really touching and great
    KEEP YOUR WORK
    GOOD LUCK
    Remember Me :P
    Nema
    XoXoXoX

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie84

    WELCOME TO THE CLUB!! :)

    Very sweet poem...though I have a suggestion...you shouldn't shorten words such as "thru" and "cuz" as that can some times make people think you are not a serious writer. Whether you are or not it will make people skip right over your poems. I don't read poems and/or comment on them when they have writing such as that within them.

    This poem was so sweet and nicely put.... :)