Comments : A girl and her book (Part 2)

  • 13 years ago

    by RiVerFrOmTeArS

    If this is a true stor I'm so sorry i never had a sister but I know how it feel to loose a silbing i lost a brother

  • 13 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    wow hun the first one of this nearly had me crying and this is a gd sequel. if this is a true story im sorry for you. take care xox

  • 12 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Woah...gr8 2nd part 2 part 1! wow..that was so great!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 12 years ago

    by â—ŠJâ—Š

    OMG...this two poem are wonderful..im speechless and crying...thats brilliant...amazing
    5/5 of course

  • 12 years ago

    by amber

    Great poem, i never got to read the first one but this one is great. . .check my work out sometime,thanks
    ~*~Amber~*~
    p.s if this is true i'm really sorry, one of my sisters used to cut herself and i never knew until later, sometimes it's just not our fault that we didn't notice, they do such a d**n good job of hiding it

  • 12 years ago

    by BlAcK TaNgLeD HeArT

    That is so sad. :-(
    im in the same situation, but i would be the one who wrote in the diary. Who wished *he* was there for me.
    5/5

    -xox-

  • 11 years ago

    by Anick

    Wonderful!
    You're a very telented person.
    Keep writing!
    XoX
    A-T.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast

    GOB-SMACKED ..!!

    You are an swesome writer.
    I hope you post MORE poems, and i'm addin you as a fave, so that i don't miss out on anything new..!! The 1st and second one made me cry. Almost everything you wrote that was in that book, well it's kinda like me ..!!

    Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast

  • 11 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    Good story so far

  • 10 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    Omg i was looking through your poems but this one caught my eye i read your first one and this was simply amazing. your poetry is remarkable. you should consider writing books if you havent already 5/5 keep writing
    kat

  • 10 years ago

    by Lorryn

    This is such a beautiful poem...but i cant help but think your alluding to yourself in this poem...

  • 10 years ago

    by Niinaa

    Beautiful

  • 10 years ago

    by Jessica

    I cried when i read the first one. and i was close to tears reading this one. it is really good. keep writing.

  • 10 years ago

    by Mary

    Great poem so sad. I almost started to cry. I loved the first one as well as this one. Good Job. keep it up :)