Comments : Goodnight Kiss...Bleah

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    i'm not good at love poems, but have we all have our subjects that we need to improve on, i think that you WILL definately be able to become really good at them! you have very gifted talent and for the subject of love i admitt i NEED practice but you will get better. it's a good job though! keep up the wonderful work

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

  • 18 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    I can almost picture myself holding my hands out only for them to be left there. Great two verses hun <3

    LoveView,
    - Kals.