Frozen

by deadnalone   Jun 8, 2005


Frozen angel, frozen heart,
Frozen soul, Torn apart,

Frozen life, Frozen tears,
Frozen hurt, Frozen fears,

Frozen mask, Frozen mind,
Frozen smile, I can't find,

Frozen cold, it won't melt,
Frozen pain, pain I've felt,

Frozen inside, Frozen within,
Frozen scars, Frozen skin,

Frozen blood, Frozen love,
Frozen friends, From above,

Frozen craving, frozen whole,
Frozen completely, beyond my control,

Frozen dreams, memories,
Frozen sights, things she sees,

Frozen eyes, in her head,
Frozen cries, in her bed,

Frozen thoughts, won't defrost yet,
Frozen feelings, I cannot forget,

Frozen inside, lost within,
Frozen uncomfortable in my skin,

Frozen angel, frozen heart,
Frozen soul, and its tearing apart.

*All votes and comments greatly appreciated as always*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hidden Meaning

    i really like the way this poem rhymes its easier to read this way it is written and yet still contains such emotion i enjoyed this one alot even though it was sad 5/5,

    x x x jen x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by deadnalone

    tanku both xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by confusion

    style works very well, builds the poem up making you read faster. brill job ell

    lu -x-x-x-

  • 18 years ago

    by Toni

    Ooo liked this style! Different but also kinda original, dont know how u managed to make it rhyme too! Mus b natural talent :-) xxx

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