Comments : Frozen

  • 18 years ago

    by Toni

    Ooo liked this style! Different but also kinda original, dont know how u managed to make it rhyme too! Mus b natural talent :-) xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by confusion

    style works very well, builds the poem up making you read faster. brill job ell

    lu -x-x-x-

  • 18 years ago

    by deadnalone

    tanku both xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Hidden Meaning

    i really like the way this poem rhymes its easier to read this way it is written and yet still contains such emotion i enjoyed this one alot even though it was sad 5/5,

    x x x jen x x x