The wording you used was great. These lines were especially touching:
She Awoke In Heaven
Death Had Sought To Kiss Her
As She Cuddled Amongst
Her Sorrows Final Whisper
Nice job. You took a commonly used topic, but you made it unique in your own way. The fact that you used capital letters for almost every word was distracting, but other than that this was a nice write.
Nice. At first I didn't think it was my kinna poem but it took me by surpise. I pictured it and then all the sudden this person in pane and misrable. Most of my poems are about death and stuff so yeah. By the way thanks for the comment. But yes it is true. But just so you know most of my poems are never true and I only take pleasure out of death if it's in my poetry. If you read my others you will see a lot of it and I don't want you to get the wrong Idea. 5 c ya.