Good Job old man! Hope everything is ok. Awesome job, keep it up. Love SNTR.

Excellent.

This is so very ture i mean "I feel so alone, yet I have all my friends surronding me" i feel that way a lot so outta place and just not there great writing yet again....

First off, this poem definantly needs some breaks.. i didnt take a breath! the lack of breaks causes the reader to 'speed read' the poem and lose how good it is.

but i love the poem, i feel the same fricken way all the time.

4/5

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NO 5/5!!!
i wrote 4/5 but voted 5/5 lol

This is not your best poem! it was more like a letter than a poem! but it had feelings in side!

keep it up!

Wow... this poem really speaks to me... i have these feelings... its like i wrote it!! lol!! wow! scary...lol... it is like an addiction...

"It's an addiction like drugs. You can't stop even if you want to...not that I want to...but if I did, I wouldn't be able to because I love the pain and the blood and the words so much"

that part... its amazin... well written