excellent poem, love the line of "Trying to walk with something that won't move" very cool, created images within my head! wonderful first love poem! (lots better then my frist love poem!!)

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

I can especially relate with this one. Love is like [sometimes] talking to a brick wall .. a concrete heart and all those horrible things. This was fantastic hun <3

Love y0'
// Kals.