Comments : Twinkle Twinkle Falling Tears

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    these are so cool to read and sing the song along that go with it that kids here all the time! i did one for a school project once, fun to make also! always write and always take care, i'm always here

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

  • 18 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Loving the last line hun.
    "Scars will tattoo all my years."

    - Amazing stuff, you're good at those quirky little nursery rhyme poems. :)

    Love yew,
    xxx - Kal.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenna #24

    that was an awesome poem...i liked it a lot

    plz check out my poems...plz vote and comment!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel

    hey, I think it's very good and clever. Check out some of my stuff if you have time.

    xoxoRachel

  • 18 years ago

    by Megin

    that is really good!! 5/5 keep it up..if u get the chance ckeck out mine please

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Wo. O_o I just got on my computer...hey my poem's the highest r8ing 2day....
    ......

    COOL!

    Thanx every1 4 your comments! I will personally thank u in a comment on your own work. PEACE AND SO MUCH LUV EVERYONE!!!! //ari\\

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    U know i didn't actually think it was all that good. But since everyone else likes it...well OK! ^_^

    woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
    i'M b0R3d.

  • 18 years ago

    by JL

    cool poem/song thing yea lol.......neway gr8 job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Hey, i'm not on the highest r8ing list anymore...:P haha that's cool! Peace All of Ya and Goodnite! //ari\\

  • 18 years ago

    by Carrie

    hey.. this is really good..i liked it alot... 5/5... and thanks for the comment on mine... and for the title suggestion thinger... i may use that as the title..but im not sure yet..

  • 18 years ago

    by A.Hill

    decent! keep it up...

  • 18 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    So cool hon,
    You write beautifully

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    damn lol thats good keep writtin ur great for real

  • 18 years ago

    by stephanie

    nice poem 5/5 its very interesting..but i like it.....htanks for commentign on my poem it means a lot to me...plz comment/vote on some more oi would appriciate it.....
    -*- stephanie -*_

  • 18 years ago

    by mkhoviyeun

    omg.. i love the twinkle twinkle little star song.. and this is one of a great verse! =) i like it! 25/5!