I don't doubt that this is a good poem, and a lot of it IS original, but the lines talkin about when she's walkin home from school, "then raped and left in pain...she can't tell her parents, and it hurts to tell her friends, she doesn't know what she'll do to make this nightmare end", those lines aren't yours, u should've disclaimed them or somethin cuz all u did was thow in broken girl broken girl. The name of the poem is Another Statistic. I'll r8 a 4 for the original parts. peace
You're very welcome. I want 2 let u know that I have read your other work and they are full of emotion and wonderful though sorrowful meaning. They are very good! U don't need to take anyone else's lines, u r a tru poet at heart. Don't let anyone tell u different. Tru Peace and Happiness, //ari\\
P.s.-And I'm so sorry if this ever happened to you. Hopefully it never has.