very well written and a great message
~Freak~

very emotional poem. Nice job!

wow that was a great poem u have sooooo much talent that is going to take u somewhere someday
Dee

Wow... uhm idk what to say. i absolutly LOVE this poem!!! it was amazing. and you took something/ a phrase, that people use everyday. and turned it around. and i LOVE how you did that.

i love the last stanza and the people you described. it was an amazing write.

great job!!