Incomplete

by Julez   Jun 15, 2005


I look at the mirror and think of the past.
When i was feeling happy, thinking that would last.
I guess i was wrong just look at my face.
The past is no longer visible not even a trace.
It's not just my looks but my emotions too.
I'm totally different and it's all because of you.
I know i don't show always running to hide. When i think about what happened, I can do nothing but cry.
I say it doesn't bother me, but i know deep inside,
that the advantages you took over me truly is not a lie.
It took me awhile to notice what was wrong.
Because of you, the girl you once knew is now long, long gone.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel

    Aww, this is touching..and it's great! Thanks for the comment on my poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Piper

    i like this poem i wrote a poem called the suicide check it out and comment please tell me what you think