That was really good, u r a really good writer. luv Steph

waoh that was really deep....and so true you write really well im addin u to ma fav's...i love your peoms and u are so talented....5/5

I love poems that tell stories even though I can't really write them. Good job. 5/5 kilman = David B.

love it very original!...and thanks so much for your comment on mine.
~Christina

i really dont like when people make bad comment because there in not a;lot of rhyme it doesnt have to rhyme all the time and ur poem is a good example of it 5/5 srri i didnt comment i went to watch a movie anyways yeh see ya!

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loved it
SoOoOoOoo meaningful and Awesome
you're talented
keep your work
good luck
Nema
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good poem! Your a awsome writer! Keep it up! =D