Just Existing

by †JustAri†   Jun 16, 2005


So helpless...
I don't need this shame
I don't deserve this pain
I'm wasting my life away

All alone.
By myself again because I can't relate
Shutting down constantly because I can't take it anymore
Keep in mind it's a fact that nothing matters

Do I exist?
The only way I know for sure is if I hurt myself
Nothing else here is real
So do I have the right to say these feelings are solid?

*Um...I'm not sure if it's finished or not. I wrote this on March 29, 2005. Thanks for reading! Peace!*

© Copyright Ariana 2003-2005

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  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    yes what Kalah said it truely does...

    -Josiah

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Oh snap lil slam that's a kick @$$ title! I'll use it! OMFG thanx so much...Peace and Luv and So Many Tite Hugs, //Ari\\

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    i think that what you have so far is great! maybe a title u can use is just existing, cause i see you have in the title thingy needs a title. but you do what you feel is best. wonderful job! and yes ur at the top of my list!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love!

  • 18 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    I think the first line of each stanza explains the poem in a nutshell.

    Luvvoo forever Ari <33333.
    --Kal.

  • 18 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this is pretty good, i know wut u mean, keep on writing and take care!!
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy