Comments : Just Existing

  • 18 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this is pretty good, i know wut u mean, keep on writing and take care!!
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 18 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    I think the first line of each stanza explains the poem in a nutshell.

    Luvvoo forever Ari <33333.
    --Kal.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    i think that what you have so far is great! maybe a title u can use is just existing, cause i see you have in the title thingy needs a title. but you do what you feel is best. wonderful job! and yes ur at the top of my list!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love!

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Oh snap lil slam that's a kick @$$ title! I'll use it! OMFG thanx so much...Peace and Luv and So Many Tite Hugs, //Ari\\

  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    yes what Kalah said it truely does...

    -Josiah