i really like the flow and emotion in thi one. and really good images and really good.....just really good. tgreat poem han.

a very good poem. when you find the answer can you tell me too? i could use it aswell...oh yeah...about the poem. very nice. it has a very nice flow and rhyming pattern, good imagery too. and a meaning alot of people can reflect onto their own lives, which is always good in a poem! i have now given a comment on every poem :D hopefully when you get back from cornwall you will love me. i am bored and i thought what better way to waste my time than to make somebody happy when thewy see 13 little red numbers by their poems! so i did. if you ever get bored read sweet enigma's poetry, it is very very good, and we need her to write more too! or alternatively you could read mine, but that may bore you out of your skull and may result in more 'pah.hmph.''s. i will leave you alone no. dont hate me for commenting on every poem! :D

love ya always

~madfry~