WOULD YOU?

by Joann   Jun 16, 2005


Would you hold my hand and be here?
or would you turn around and run?
would you be honest truthful loyal?
or would you hurt me just for fun?

would you lay right here beside me?
would you dry the tears i cry?
would you help me mend this broken heart?
or would you sit and watch me die?

would you offer me a helpful hand?
would you look into these eyes?
would you be here for me through thick and thin?
and never say goodbye?

those words are just in stanzas
just some stupid mindless thoughts
just words i thought were true to me
until the pain that you then brought

because you didn't hold my hand
you were never really there
you turned your back and ran away
you weren't loyal you weren't fair

because you didn't lay beside me
you didn't dry the tears i cried
you broke my "almost mended heart"
then you laughed and watched me die

your helpful hand was nowhere to be found
not once did you look me in the eye
but through all those phases i loved you still...
up until you said GOODBYE

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  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    So sad, but so beautiful... hun you've really got a talent in writing that I've rarely seen. So please continue with poetry, because I love reading your work. Great job hun!

  • The First Stanza Spoke To My Heart, In Every Relationship I've Been In I Ask Myself That Question Alot 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Taylor

    great poem! i love it! really..sad..easy to relate to..keep it up!

    Love, Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by --*arlene*--

    i liked it keep it up 5/5?