I'm so sorry to hear about your father. That is really hard to go through, I can't even imagine how difficult it is for you... But that is great to see that you are taking it well as far as I can see. Excellent job on your poem, very well done... 5/5
Wow. That was so good. It was such a heart-breaking poem (like in a goodway). So many people complain about their dads but I can't believe we take them for granted so often. I promise I will pray for you an dall the people who have lost someone important to them.
If you want take a look at my poems. I'm not as well a writer as I wish to be because I love writing so much, but I do try so it's all good.
Thanx so much for sharing this poem with everyone..
hey, im so sorry to hear about your dad, i kinda know how it feels to lose something you love soooooo much, your poem rules, my email is firstname.lastname@example.org we should chat sometime... xoxoxox