Comments : Mommy Please Stop Crying

  • 12 years ago

    by x~broken~angel~x

    that is sad, i really loved reading it. i feel so sorry for you. if you would like, please have a look at some of my poems. stay strong xxx
    luv steph

  • 12 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    That's very touching...i'm so sorry. But it's a very good poem. 5/5 I'm here if you wanna talk. Again, so sorry about your loss. Peace and So Much Luv and So Many Tite Hugs, //Ari\\

  • 12 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Hey hey forgot to tell u...WELCOME TO THE SITE!!! :) //Ariana\\

  • 12 years ago

    by nadine

    hey.

    thats a really sad poem..i got tears in my eyes..it is a good poem:(

  • 12 years ago

    by Char

    I'm so sorry to hear about your father. That is really hard to go through, I can't even imagine how difficult it is for you... But that is great to see that you are taking it well as far as I can see. Excellent job on your poem, very well done... 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Nikki

    Hunny I"m really sorry if you wanna talk about it my email it crimson_tears_1116@yahoo.com
    stay strong
    ~Nikki~

  • 12 years ago

    by Brook

    awe...sad but beautiful...great write

  • 12 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    this is a sad but good poem
    great job

  • 12 years ago

    by Tammy

    hey... that's an awesome poem... you have a lot of talent, courage, and strength... i just lost my grandfather a couple months ago... he was my best friend... if you ever need to talk, email me!!

  • 12 years ago

    by **Yari**

    its a really good poem and really touching good luck w/ur poems

  • 12 years ago

    by emmajaynexo

    Wow
    This is an amazing poem
    I'm so sorry about your dad.
    But someone is there to catch your tears.
    Stay strong and have hope
    Emma x

  • 12 years ago

    by Lu

    Very touching5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by kirsty

    hi, i no how you feel, my dads gone to. your poem is sooo powerfull, it made me go to tears. gd luck and im sorry about your dad. keep strong!! xxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    omg i love it, so sad! i'm really sorry about your dad, hope your holding up ok. must have been real tough, but you wrote a wonderfully put poem.

    ~PLP~ lil slam~

  • 12 years ago

    by ~*~ColdHope~*~

    it was very moving..its hard to right about loved ones being gone 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Esmeralda

    This was so sad it brought tears to my eyes this c\sucks when you lose someone close i lost my grand ma and it still hurts even after all these years.

  • 12 years ago

    by amandaa

    Wow. That was so good. It was such a heart-breaking poem (like in a goodway). So many people complain about their dads but I can't believe we take them for granted so often. I promise I will pray for you an dall the people who have lost someone important to them.

    If you want take a look at my poems. I'm not as well a writer as I wish to be because I love writing so much, but I do try so it's all good.

    Thanx so much for sharing this poem with everyone..

    -Amanda

  • 12 years ago

    by RaveGirl

    hey, im so sorry to hear about your dad, i kinda know how it feels to lose something you love soooooo much, your poem rules, my email is spott_14@hotmail.com we should chat sometime... xoxoxox
    KiddysAngel

  • 12 years ago

    by Sourav

    it's a wonderful poem. i'm touched. you are very talented. but i'm really sorry about your father.

  • 12 years ago

    by stephanie

    beth, now im crying!!