Comments : Mommy Please Stop Crying

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather Griffith

    Awsome poem! very emotional.

  • 18 years ago

    by cassidy

    Sorry abought you dad! I love your poem

  • i can't imagine what it could be like losing a father. Its so amazing how can write about it and let other poeple in on a little bit of how you must feel. Great work and keep writing you're really good at it.

  • 18 years ago

    by jessica

    wow that was really good. It made me have chills.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicholle

    wow, it's so great you can write a poem about your father's death. if i had faced that then i could never reveal my feelings. great poem, keep it up. if you can please comment me on my poem "I" and others if you can :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    thats a really good poem. 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Megan

    That was one of the greatest poems I have ever read! I'm sorry about your dad. I know how hard it is to lose someone. Keep your chin up. Good luck in the future. If you would please check out my poem Addicts it's my first and it would mean alot to me. thanks and good luck!

  • 18 years ago

    by Abzy

    Ace, if uve been writing for years, where are they?

  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley Marie

    i am really sorry about your dad! You are a very strong person, for writing about it. 5/5
    Hayley-Ree xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by kiri

    hey i luv ya poem nd i am just lyk natasia my dad takes drugs nd i dis own him he is realli suk thou he will die real soon but if u need any1 2 talk to u can talk to me at i_luv_kaitlyn_n_lleyton_4_life.com.au

    luv kiri xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by heart broken :(

    love it

  • 18 years ago

    by Krista

    i am really sorry about your dad. i wish you and your family the best of luck.

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Oh, wow, i'm still crying! that poem was so deep, and i know you have heard a lot of this, and i won't express my pity, but wow...i'm speechless...continue writing, you have amazing talent

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

    wow, thats really good. i have this poem i wrote called daddy about my dad, but my dad isnt dead he just never wanted a kid, and i guess i'd kind of rather have known my dad and knew he loved me and lost him than know he never wanted me, but yeah...it's hard either way

  • 18 years ago

    by Keisha

    this poem was good. i liked it. very touching

  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    i really like this poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    AW thats amazing and increadably sad.... beautiful work.. thanx for sharing

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetess Lana

    This was very sad, but beautiful. Im sorry about your dad; i (halfway) know how you feel. still, awesome poem.

    5/5

    -Allanah

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Excellent poem, keep writing x x x x take kare x x x

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    This is a beautiful poem..keep it up sweetheart..
    -sarah