Prisoner

by midnight♥lullibys   Jun 19, 2005


Alex you were always there
when i needed someone to care.
Becky I'm your baby
together we get kind of crazy.
Kristen your such a sweetie,
i hope you never forget me.

I'm so very fortunate,
To have such sturdy friends,
I even have a mate,
My heart he always mends.

I really love living
Outside of my home
It ends my hearts aching
And I'm free to roam

So much opportunity
To do as i please,
Out in natures beauty
To experience life's tough journey's.

But to that I've been forbidden...
Grounded to this spot
Until my soul is broken,
My feelings are forgot.

please vote/comment.....it would mean alot to me.....thanks

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  • 12 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Amazing job. but i'm really lost with this poem to tell you the truth. Like i understand the beginning and then all of a sudden like it switches i mean i shouldn't be talking but still. I dunno who knows. but you did an amazing job. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jamie

    Okay once again i love how you write your true feelings down i think your a very talented writer it was a bit choppy but if i was your friend and you wrote this for me i would be thrilled it is very thoughtful and the idea itself and the kindness and the thought that you actually appriciate these people gets this poem a 5/5 on its own great job

  • 12 years ago

    by Carmen

    The beginning has nothing to do with the poem, so it adds kind of a shadowy cast. you should take away the first two stanzas and add more to your emotions of being a prisoner. if you're free to roam, (like you mentioned in the third stanza,) your not really a prisoner. you need to revise this one a bit.

  • 12 years ago

    by M MEM

    Damn
    deep
    this means so much more than words would admit

  • 12 years ago

    by Razorblade

    Very good. I liked it a lot!

    -Taylor

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