Comments : Prisoner

  • 12 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    When I first started to read this poem I was going to say it should go under friendship. As I read on I changed my mind. I think you made the right choice because you are writing about life. Anyways you showed a lot of true emotions. Very well expressed! Keep it up! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 12 years ago

    by .

    *i deff. dont get the freeflying*till im shot thing...lol but it was cory angelo i met him in Ohio lol........oh yeah 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Leah20

    This was alright. I felt that the rhyme scheme, especially at the last stanza felt forced. Like I said before depression poems aren't my favorite. Keep writing!

  • 12 years ago

    by shakenangel

    this is really well written, I give it a five!

  • 12 years ago

    by Areyoucrazy

    I like how you wrote it . It was really good .
    Keep it up
    April`

  • 12 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin

    Excellent dedication.

  • 12 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Not your best but its still very very good!!! I liked how you went through the 1st part and named off your friends and what they mean to you! thats awesome! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    once again, this was just..wow! it was amazing. its great you have such strong friends. 5/5 keep writing!

  • 12 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Well written, I know i've felt like this more than once...make's you very thankful to the ones who stick by you.

  • 12 years ago

    by Marjan

    wow, you express your feelings wonderfully. You're really talented.
    much love,
    marjan

  • 12 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    I can really relate to this part-
    "i really love living
    outside of my home
    it ends my hearts aching
    and I'm free to roam"
    love your poem, and I hope things get better for you=)5/5
    ~Christina

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrea

    i liked this poem. even tho it was a lil bit about depression it showed alot of emotion

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    wow..very heartfelt from beginning to the end. it was good. xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Emilia

    wow, great! 5/5!

  • 12 years ago

    by Rolo

    Twas okay, rhyming was a it forced, but like I said before, it was heartfelt and had feeling. Write on!

  • 12 years ago

    by Chris

    that's a GREAT poem....it was really good.

  • 12 years ago

    by katie!

    Heartfelt poem, full of emotion and different feelings, the way it was written was interesting as well, flowed well, good poem.. good work

    xxxxxxxxxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Wintersolstice

    Hmm...odd-so original. X

  • 12 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Nice rhyming....heartfelt, friends are so important. Lovely job with this poem.

    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    Amazing work. Definatley from the heart. Keep up the great work!

    <3Much Love<3
    ~*hAiLy*~