5/5 great write! sorry this comment is going to be kinda short, i have a lot of poems to read and catch up on! but it's wonderful to be back and able to read what everyone wrote as i was away! lovely to be able to read your work again! even though i was having an awesome time being able to just write with other writers for about a week being on this website is the one thing i missed!

~PLP ~ lilslam~ lots of hugs and love~

Very nice, and I'm sure it's even better put to music. Well anyway, I looked up the title for that chili peppers song, and it's called "Otherside". OK well I hope that helps.

Yeahp the song by the chillis is called "otherside" - it is deffinatley an awesome song.

Sorry i haven't been on here in quite a while; i've been away on a Netball tournment and haven't got anywhere near a computer. Seems asthough i have alot of poems to read and i only have about 5 hours before i'm off to Australia on another netball trip :D

So i'll see you in 1 week when i get back.

Love you hun,
Hope you are okay <3

+ ^Kal.

well no i didn't mean like ALL my comments and ALL of your comments, just like my comments are more spread out, your new poems get more than mine, i think. but ya i'm not counting ALL my comments lol

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love from the bottom of my heart~

This one was fair.

lol good song but idk wut the red hot chili peppers one is called but i no what ur talking bout lol great song i like it

hey, ok just wanted to give you the heads up that i'm leaving for upnorth for my grandma's and grandpa's till saturday and don't know if i can get on the computer and stuff, so i hope you have a wonderful weekend and have a good fourth and stuff like that! i'm not leaving for another couple hours but i still have to pack lol! take care! i'll MISS YOU!!

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

hey haven't seen you in a while which kind of worries me! hope things are flying good and not bad, miss ya lots! take care,

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love straight from my heart~

another great song! omg u're a great writter! 25/5!