Comments : That Tragic Night

  • 12 years ago

    by quick&painless

    im so sorry about that... that happened to me too, we weren't friends for long, but it still hurt alot.. i couldnt imagine how hard that must b.. hope everythings ok.

    and what r u talking about?!?! ur a great writer!! keep writing!

  • 12 years ago

    by undying blusher

    that is tragic indeed...i love the poem. your writing is too great. from the one i've read :)

    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Full of emotion! Very well written and also very sad. Good message in the poem too. You have a talent to write! Keep posting! ~Brooke~

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    sad but well written

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Hopefully it's not about anyone you know.

    The only suggestion I would make... (One that I seem to make a lot now)...would be to erase all the commas and periods you have the end of the sentence. They really aren't necessary and can sometimes take away from the flow.

    Other than that I'd say it's a very nice write. Though it's a bit sad it's full of emotion. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by ...:NiKi:...

    very well written, great job! 5/5!

  • 12 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    that muxtas been hard for you, or whoever its about lol but good work once again!

  • 12 years ago

    by erikka baby

    This was so sad. But written beautifully

  • 12 years ago

    by Emily

    Thats soo sad. I promised myself I'll never do drugs, and I have all the friends I need without a gang.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashli

    nice job! keep it up....maybe you could include something about the drugs and the gang somewhere in the poem, instead of mentioning it after? otherwise sad and well written! good job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Carmen

    omg, that was so sad! *pouts* 5/5 im so sorry if that was true

  • 12 years ago

    by allison

    This is really good. Im sorry for your loss. The scheme kind of lost itself in a couple of places but, still nothing to worry about. Amazing
    Love Always
    Allison

  • 12 years ago

    by tabithaa

    5/5... excellent

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrea

    awww your poems are so sad. but really good.

  • 12 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    aww that is also sad, i hope this isnt true, TELL ME IT ISNT TRUE lol, jks but if it is true, i am so sorry!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by XxXangeltearsXxX

    such a sad poem, i hope it didnt happen to you? anyway great poem, nice work!

  • 12 years ago

    by stephyG

    omg great work really loved it.. well done mwahz!! ur so talenteed.. please check out my newest poem "help me" n tell me wat u fink stephy :):)

  • 12 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    5/5 well written

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrea

    aww thats sad!

  • 12 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    OMG! This is sooo sad. I'm sorry this happened to you! Great write though!

    <3Much Love<3
    ~*hAiLy*~