i think i shud start gettin used to gr8 poems from u.. after readin only 2 of ur poems, am already redy 4 more.. and am sure i wudnt expect any less amazing than this.. reli gr8
thumbs up!!
tc
nouna

omfg that made me cry so beautifuly done and so sad!! i loved it 5/5

wow, 5/5-- another sad and well written poem. <3

awww this is soooo sad and yes very tragic!!! very touching and heartbreaking....Good job...

*Hugs sabrina*

Very well done I see your work progressing with each poem thats great!!!

I really loved this poem, it flowed great and the rhyming was almost perfect. Great Job ღ

Powerful ending to a well written poem. Good work :)
xxx

Wow...cant even begin to imagine...must have been horrible...im soo sorry if it is true but great poem....luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Nicely written, I enjoyed it and loved the way you rhymed, good job! 5/5

a sad poem, written in such a nice and beautiful way. good work x

had chills down my back on that one.. I have a alot of friends that went to gangs and they're all locked up now except one. I'm lucky I quit hanging out with them when I did or I'd probably be in there with them.

Very good poem, lines and syllables matched very well together.

Best wishes,
Patrik

This is great...I'm sorry that it's true though! Hope you're friend is okay, it sounds like a very big loss...

darn you are good you have alot of hurt to if you ever need to talk hit me up i am here for you..

Drugs and gang violence are definitley two of the worst things that society is fighting in urban areas. I've lost my share of friends and neighbors to this kind of lifestyle, and it's not the best to live through.

Take Care,
Renee

Im sorry if this happened. i lost my best friend to a eating disorder rehab it sucks...but you captured the feeling of loss and hurt really well i love your writing and i think your on my favs but if not you will be now : )

Oh so emotional! I nearly cried at this one. I think the way you wrote it to express yourself was fantastic! I am feeling a bit better today. Afterall i have my family and friends to think about too. Keep smiling hun :)

Amazing, superb poem, all I can do is stand in awe, this is truly incredible, keep p the fantastic work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace