Too Much

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Jun 22, 2005


My soul is screaming,
I seem to've stopped breathing,
Why won't this stop?
Why can't it just leave me alone?
I've lost all feeling,
My soul is screaming,
Why must this be known?
Why can't I be shown?

Maybe it's time
To let go
Maybe its time,
Just to let it show.

Too much to handle
Too much to bare,
Too much to handle,
BUt what if I dare?
What if I took my wrist;
Drew a picture with a twist?
Would you mind,
Or are you so blind?
Life has left me,
Nothing matters anymore,
I never had you, I was nothing to be;
They have closed, these shadowed doors,
Never to open again.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    I like this poem but i think you could do a better ending than the one you had (soz) the one you gots good but it isn't as good as the rest of the poem#1 still gave it a 5 though!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    &&&&&& i love the ending, very dramatic.. lol..

    =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Great Poem, i found my self singing it. (weird i know) but sirisly - this could be a kick @ss song, the only thing is the drew a picture on my wrist with a twist part, that very-umm over used i guess, as a siggy in alot of message boards. it works tho, and i myself have also used things like that for inspiration, or tidbits in my poems, i warn you tho not to over use them. or you'll get in trouble..lol.

    5|5

    &tinyheart;

  • 18 years ago

    by Sixpence None The Richer

    Awesome poem!! Top job I voted 5 :P All your poems are soo deep but O so awesome!! One of my fav writers definatly!!! Love SNTR.

  • 18 years ago

    by Freakfall

    I loved it very well written 5/5

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