Wow, that's so deeply and make you think twice about shit like that cuz ppl talk a lot of shit they say shit but they dont want to do it u no ? i mean i say shit and i don 't mean it , but sometime i do, be safe don't be sorry

that was a really good poem....

wow that was excellent that was so sad but so good of writing

it was a really great poem and it totaly made sense
i know alot of people, including me, can relate to it
good job

that peom is amazing - ive been through alot and i feel like you took the thoughts right out of my head of what that stuff feels like.

That was awsome i canrelate check out some of my poems keep writtin

Wow!!! This is really good writing, so intence and makes yu sit on the edge of your seat awaiting the next line.. this is fantastic 5/5... if yu get a chance can yu check out my poem im not perfect im sorry..thanks heaps ..keep up the good work xxx

its really good... a lil scary but good... much love
Amanda

oh my gah that is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good

=*( I loved this...this was so beautiful and touching =*(...great work...keep it up xxxxxxxxxxxx

-Mortalidaga
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Very good poem.. i loved it..very nice.. good job and keep writing.. bye bye EJ

Excellent job my friend... That was very well done! You have great talent! Keep it up! I'm still a beginner, and not all that good... But you are amazing! I can't wait to read more from you! Once again, fantastic work... 5/5

that was amazing.... i loved it.... keep writing..... if you can will u please comment on my poems thanks and that was phenominal....love ya lots...xoxo oh yea 5/5

awesome. i love it. i almost cried, i was definetly teary. it was sad, but good.

hey i really loved that poem

wow I see you're really new to the site, and here you're already on the top poetry page...keep it up! I read a few and I love them all, so...you're going on my favorites!=)
~Christina

Hey, this is good...i really like it...you did a great job...and i think you really captured feelingz in this...keep on writing and take care!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

That's freakin awsome.....5/5

so awsome i loved it don't ever stop writing.

awsum poem mate.so deep and tuching . nd 2 fink she didnt want 2 do it in da end and died it sooo sad wel done