O hun thats a wonderful poem! don't worry i have a ton of rape poems and i never have been raped either, but you did a wonderful job at it! it's so sad, your depressing me with this one but you did such a great job at it too! *opens case, it doesn't matter if i got better and more awards! i've just been here longer, you got your awards faster! and plus you have high ratings for your poems, gez for example my attemptive love poem, "Family by Heart not blood" someone gave it a one voting after you gave it a five so ya example of a low rating i have. just face it, your poem is better.

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

wow...beautiful!!! this is really amazing!!! keep it up!
Ariane
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lol ya i noticed they were from one person on your how does it feel lol! i was like huh? whats she got to say so much about the poem? i loved that poem but still i don't know if i would comment on it that many times lol u did a wonderful job on that poem, ur a great poet! but that poem of yours is longer than mine, and U know IT!

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love from the bottom of the heart~

lol i didn't mean longer! i can't believe i put that, it doesn't make much sence i meant to say better! leave it to a blond to get longer and better mixed up huh?

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

wow this is amazing 5/5

This was a well writen poem for not experencing it your self. You did a real good jod.

amazing!!! 5/5 xxx

Wow neat poem, moral of the story is, dont get drunk! and cut yourself ;0

Great job!! it was a lil long but it was still very interesting! i thought it was great, i gave ya a 5/5, keep up the great work!

b glad uve nvr gone throw tht it sux i have n u lose controll for sum one who hasnt been thro it u sound so familiar w/ how it made me feel n what i did

really good...speachless
lovexoxo

i can so relate to dis poem it sucks wen this sort of stuff happens awesum poem keep in touch keep up da gud wrk
Kerry Anne
xxx

It was then in the driveway I pulled out a razor
My therapist, my beloved, my beautiful shaper
I slipped it hard into my wrist
Felt every knot in me twist

i really like this verse, nice use of words xox fallen

really beautiful
it doesnt matter that you never have been raped, the emotion that you captured in this poem is amazing and deep
5/5

This poem is so beautiful! I loved every part of it, it's really nicely written. Maybe you should put all your poems in a book, it would be worth tons! lol I'm really enjoying your work! You're very talented!
Lauren

This poem was really good, your very talented. Keep it up 5/5 much luv

~Nikki~

I really liked your poem! ;)

loooovveedd it.
comment my poems if u get time!!!!

Wow. That was so deep. The entire time I was reading it, I couldn’t pay attention to anything else. That was amazing.

~*~Christina~*~

so sad and I hope its not true cus it makes me all blue :(

its a nice piece of work!!

-Josiah