Nice poem, but try not to use 2 spaces verus one space.

Beautiful! The mysteries of love we all have those questions and feelings. You are really good at writing love poems. I can't seem to get any where with love poems! I am glad you have finally posted another great write. I have been waiting. You're one of my favorite writers on this site! Take Care and enjoy love! Brooke~

great poem with great meanings..I can say i'm crazy about it
keep that good work
and good luck
xoxoxox

What More Can I Say Its a 5.0 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Awww .. *tear*. That was totally sweet. Keep it up.

Take care,
- Shell.

Another beautiful poem, love. You went crazy on my comments. Were you drunk? XD Kidding. I'm emo? Hah. You're insane.Anyway, I do love you. If I didn't, I wouldn't have made that sign. And I come from a website where it's spelled "poseur", but some people spell it without the "u". Anyway, back to your poem, it's amazing. Like all of your poems. And I hope that publishing thing isn't a scam.
♥♥♥

-♥Ice

great poem, not to mention great expression/feeling coming from a guy (lol)...this is a great piece, be proud of this work...

p.s. - No Motiv? - I used this name because I thought I made it up, until you and about 3 other people pointed out that it was a band, lol.

*claps* nice work. keep it up
~*Freak*~

awesome, thanks for the comment...

Lovely poem...willing to take the risk...for love...great... ;)

xxx

Awesome poem. Kick ass.

I LOVE THIS POEM!!! It's amazing :)

Everyone has those doubts but if you don't take the chance you'll always wonder, "what if?" I love this piece. It left me wondering what happened. It flowed nicely and was easy to read. Lucky girl she is! :) 5/5

wow, good poem you have real talent in writing poems that capture the reader. good job!

Beautiful work. i can feel your emotion... Nice 5/5

wow, this is really good
I enjoyd reading it a lot
I know exactly what you mean, especially the first part
A 5 is the highest i can give, but it deserves much more! Keep up the good work

Wow, this is very very good, the flow was perfect and it had a most important thing in it, the feel of the emotion, great job dude! 5/5

Aw. Wow. I liked this. And, I liked how you asked questions. That was cool. And it's really easy to relate to aswell. Which is good. Lol.. There's not much else I can say. Cause there's nothing -bad- about this poem. It was great from start to finish! 5/5

.x.TaLeEe.x.

This Poem Was Great! You Could Deff Find The Meaning! The Flow Was Brilliant And The Emotion Was Good! 5/5 Your An Amazing Poet! I Think I Read 12 Of Yours Not Sure I Deff Read A Lot...But I Now Have To Go But...When I Come Back On I'll Surely Comment Some More! Just Because I Really Enjoy Yours! Thanks So Much For Letting Me Read Some Of Your Amazing Poetry! Your An Amazing Poet!!! 5/5
Love,
Steph