Hey Jarrod, i love this poem, its brilliant, you are a gifted poet. Maybe you should stick to that and leave the hacking to me! lol

woh that was awesome keep writing love to read more. luv heather

wowzers. I love how it's so simple yet says alot. Never stop writing!

So tragic. really nice. i felt the helplessness. good descriptions of the physical manifestations of emotions experienced. so much sadness and feeling in only a few lines. awesome piece. 5! -beav