I'm Gonna Have A Slip

by †JustAri†   Jun 24, 2005


My fingers tremble
They only do that
When I'm ready to make a mistake
When I know it's time to break

I'm nervous
Because the dirty razor
Is itching to get under my skin
It's thirsty again.....
So why not just let it?

To end the tension
To feel like i'm letting go
To not be afraid of myself anymore
To put trust in myself
To damage it all
It's just gonna be a little slit
I mean SLIP

The anxiety will be calmed today.

*Hmm...that made me shake a bit, even though i'm the one that wrote it. =/.....oh the one's who read it before it was edited, i'm ok now....*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Already Beautiful

    words twisted into a realistic portrait. It made me feel as though i was right there, beside you as it happened. very moving, excellent for a girl your age. id expect it to be written by a person older. thats talent girl. it was written beautifully.

  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    so much pain and sadness put in to this poem but I still love it!

    Good jobz

    -Josiah

  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    Thanks for the comment on my poem Chuckie. I love the emotion you show in all of your poems! you really show your personality through your poems!
    good work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    it gave me the chills girl! i really hope your ok, you are a wonderful friend to have and a wonderful poet! wish i could help you more than just say these words of encouragement from so far away. just keep looking forward and don't look back keep hope. wonderful poem, like always! keep it up!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

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