great poem..darling u will be ok..all u have to do is tell them u are sorry and u don't know what u were thinking a phone call, a letter, or face to face(telling them face-to-face will mean alot more) trust me i feel the same way..if u check out the quote i am going to write soon u can copy it on paper and read it or show it to them it should work...plz check out my other poems and quotes!

that s a really good poem! its sad but good. keep writing!

very good :D

nice job but you didnt really have a steady rhythm, I liked the fact that you used rhymes though. It was short and to the point which is good, alot of people keep blabbering on about the same thing over and over and it gets boring but yea you didnt. Nice job over all. and please comment or vote on some of mine.

you really wrote this poem real great! i loved it really i did the rymes and everything good job actullay great job!!!

thats a sweet poem...a lot of that shit happens in life...people make mistakes...call them and apologize if u truely mean it from ur heart...keep up the good work, Be sure to write more...they're good...

this poem is amazing!! keep writing cauz u got talent ;) !!
xxx

awesome I loved it! 5/5 keep it up! anytime girl~

Kepp on writing, this one was good. They'll only get betr

great movement throughout the poem. if that was ur first one then u better keep going. 5/5

HEy this is a really good poem i'm sorry about ur friends but if yea if u want them to be ur friends again i advise u to talk to them and try to work it out
~*Sandy*~
the girl from the chatroom

Really cute I love short and sweet but i think you can expand on this and it wud be just as great so u hav to keep on writin so i can see more of ur wokr plz comment and vote on some of mine and if u like my work add me to ur favorite xxx

I though that was an awesome poem...keep writing! You have talent! :)

hey that is good. i think you should keep writing. good job..

that was great!!!!!!!!! xxxxx

thats sad.... :( imsrry great poem tho

it was good i like it and when you get the time read some of my poems

i really felt the flow. great job. i dont need to say anything else cause everybody else already said it. 5/5

They say that one doesn't know what a good thing they have until it's gone...sometimes that's true... Good poem.

hey i love it soulds liek what i am goin though