another excellent one. once again, nice rhyming...great format. all together, nice expressions. great imagry...great job! 5/5

omg! i loved this! it flowed so well! great job!
luv always,
Ashli

Awww..thats soo sweet! The only wedding poem I've seen. You turned an event into a masterpiece. Great Job.

Beautiful poem. Very hearfelt! I love poems that are happy and that was good.

~*~Christina Lynn~*~

this is much happier than any of ur other work I've commented on. a really sweet poem with a happy ending. yay!

very good poem.. I really like this one..6.41 on my scale

good poem 5/5