Comments : Ha ha you're dead

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    aww its so sad! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    OMG, that was so sad hun!!!If only ppl didn't treat others like that, but that's life, unfortunately, I'm just glad I have friends to help me through times like that.

    *Mwah* *huggles and huggkes*

    < elizabeth!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    Wow
    u have an awesome poem..
    although it was a long one, i enjoyed it very much=)
    i'll check out your other poems
    much love.

  • 18 years ago

    by pain is me

    Very powerful...

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    That was rlly sad but i kno the feeling....thx for ur ongoing comments...u r a rlly good writer and i like ur poems alot!!
    love lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by Angel

    I like this one too!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aw wow, Thats really sad. Its so long, But it kept my attention all the way. Really good job =] 5/5

    luv natalie x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by Danielle

    Omg that is one of my favorites.. as u can tell i dont have a life....lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    Wow that is really powerful and it kept me interested right to the end. great work. keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Angela

    Uhhh at first i thought it was acute happy in the end poem, i was all like ooo those boys are gonna get it... but how wrong was i??.. what a surprise!! haha i like this one too.. good job... but i dont get it.. who killed the ant??.. the mean boy??.. or the poet one?? lol

    5/5
    <3ang

  • 16 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    Whoa
    im speechless
    that was so sad im touched!!! kids are so mean. I guess the ant was like a scene into the future or something. Absoultley amazing!!! 5/5