Comments : Invisible Ink

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    This struck me as deep and brooding! Your emotions as always perfectly intact within each line! Well done, love ya~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Heather, Well done once again. Your pattern of words and the flow.....flawless. Beautiful job.

    hugs and love, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Awesome job once again. Keep it up Heather...

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by Scaleeski

    Loved it! keep up the good work check out my new one!!

    Chris

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy

    interesting work and nicely put. Very good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    ha very cool! love it.

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love, hope everythings going ok and stuff.

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    Awesome job, as always!

    (Ps. didn't realize this was your work. seems you changed your name)

  • 18 years ago

    by Dianna M Tuohy

    Lovely job on this, hun ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    WOW HEATHER! Although that was short it was filled with so much emotion...I really hate thinking that there's things people don't know...because normally when someone says that they've had or are going through a hard time..I'm so sorry if you are and may God Bless you..But heather you are such an inspiration to others including me and since your like that..you need to be strong..I know you've probably heard that but I know you can do it..I have faith in you! Great Job heather! 5/5
    Love always,
    ~Chelsey~

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky drake

    the secrets between the lines, I guess all writers do that, its so easy to put the words down, but many times there are hidden words within the words, or as you said, the invisable ink........please know you are special, and God has a huge plan for your life. Your way to talented, you can spread a message guick......thank you again for sharing.....believe in love, and believe in God, Love ya becky

  • 18 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    HOLY! WOAH!!!! that is like one of the most brilliant pieces i've EVER read! I'm so in shock...WOAH..your soo good!! amazing! Holy...I just don't have words to describe how amazing that was...I'm sooo SOOo sooo SOO glad I decided to come check out your poems and I'll check out much more!
    Take care and mucho luv

  • 18 years ago

    by Sparklylipgloss

    I <3 it! Ommmg! Um, please comment on some of mine, seeing that no one really does, lol, im new, and Id like to be known..spread the w urd...!

  • 18 years ago

    by JL

    great job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by tabithaa

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  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Nice. Great to read your poems as usual.

  • 18 years ago

    by R F

    WOW mate! Beautiful! your title captured me, and the story is so real, I think we do have things that no one would ever know! it doesnt mean that we are hiding them, i think its just that sometimes others can't see those things! I love it when you write like that.

    much Respect,
    Rua Francis.

  • 18 years ago

    by XxIntuitiveAdvicexX

    U said so much in a such little paragraph good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    Very thought provoking Heather.

  • 18 years ago

    by fastforward

    Dayyymmmn.
    how about we trade our skills haha. :)
    i loved the poem it was just wow...completly flawless. amazing amazing job.
    i love you!