really good write = )

You mustn’t regret those failed relationships
You mustn’t live on the outside
You must live and love, not just wonder
on the inside, what it would be like

i loved those couplets, i think they are wonderful and truely express a lot more emotion then you expected them to. I think those are probably the best couplet i have heard in other a month. Very well done, best work so far. (not done repaying the ocmments favor)

Good job. This one was more of a story. I like the way you try everything in your writing that is good. Your character development was awesome. The way you explained what the characters thought and felt, good job.

The poem was very nice but it left too much in the open not much of a closure I think if you had gave either of them a final choice and showed what choice they made it would tie everything together just a thought good poem though...

wow.. this is reli gr8.. ilyk ur words and the message in it.. even tho ther was no rhyme, it fit in nicely..
keep up the gud work

very well written.
you write wonderfully.
thanks for your lovely comments.
much love,
marjan

What true words. You have a very different style of poetry. Not one of real rhyming, but of something much greater--beautiful words that can reach deep inside and take some thought to deliver. awesome.

Nice poem, I've felt like that, having seperated parents keeps me thinking that love or marrige can never lasts, but a part of me beleives, that if i find the rite guy for me...love would be everlasting...though I have douts=(

Insperational

Very inspiration naravtive.... is it from the experience of you or someone close to you? or is it just great intuition into the mind of someone who maybe in the situation?

Was a great read and amazingly written. i've read a lot of your other work and i think its simply amazing..luv ya