Sinister Forces

by Heather M Craig   Jun 28, 2005


When the hope around me crumbled
and the sky seemed to sink,
I felt trapped in an unknown world
as my body seemed to shrink.

I felt binded by nature's being
intangible to society's naked eye.
I felt trapped beneath myself
as my soul seemed to die.

I felt as if nothing could save me,
I thought the sinister forces took me, all
And I never backed down from the fight
and I found myself after all.

Heather M Craig.
--kind of weak, forgive me. It was one of those 5 minute poems.--

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  • 18 years ago

    by EMILIE

    No not weak i really like it

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    If you want to talk to me, you can check aim. I will be on there from now on. Only because you asked. I feel sorry for you heather. I will speak with you. I am sorry for the way i treated you. You can e-mail me.

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    This is a 5 minute masterpiece. It contains originality and passion. This poem has been written really well, worth 5/5. Love Emma xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by unstated affinity

    wow... excelent... i really adores your poems... you are one of my favourites..... uyou good talent in it..nice nice nice....

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    It was very good. You always had a very good talent. Always and forever I thank you for your comments. Take care.
    ~The Unforgiven

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