Comments : The graduation speech

  • 12 years ago

    by Sparklylipgloss

    aw, thats sweet, sad, but so good.

  • 12 years ago

    by tabithaa

    this is awesome- my brother just graduated...

  • 12 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    OMFG u ROCk at writing poems ...

  • 12 years ago

    by Margaret

    Wow, alot of the poems I have been reading have put a lot in perspective for me. This is definetly one!
    Thanks 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by brittany

    i can realt to the guy who took his life. b/c im the one of the kids who always got picked on. but i have NEVER wanted to take my own life. ne way 5/5 keep up the good wrk

  • 12 years ago

    by samy

    Hey that was realy good i lobe how u write poems

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah

    WOW this is really gud!!! keep up the gud work bub... laterz!

  • 12 years ago

    by Shawnda

    that's um... that's really good!!!
    SHAWNDA

  • 12 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    OMG this is the best poem ever!!!..ur a flippin poet prodoje <-----dont know how to spell that ...haha well keep it up ...
    later
    liz

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsi

    This is soo sad,....at my school we have had quite a few classmates do that. I hope this isn't real, and if it is.......I am sorry. So many people are picked on, but not everyone can see the hatred and lonliness behind their eyes. Very good, 5/5!!

  • 12 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    omffg awsome poem
    i loved it
    ~HazE

  • 12 years ago

    by +Fouillis+

    Wow. i love the way you rite, its totally transfixing... ill have to read the rest of your poems hey.. and then maybe you could return the favour? yeh anyways, 5/5. good work, love emles

  • 11 years ago

    by Something has a hold of me

    This is really good. I can say i did that too made fun of some kids just to fit in and three of them killed themselves our 12th grade year and I have felt a lot of guilt. I really like your poems.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni

    Oh my gosh. i'm near tears. that was so sad. the beginning was so happy and everything and then the ending just make me tear up! good job! 5/5!

  • 11 years ago

    by Wishing4perfect

    WOW, you really have talent!

  • 11 years ago

    by Doesnt matter

    This is sad..

  • 10 years ago

    by Tanya

    WOW!! I LOVEDIT. i HAD A CLASSMATE WHO TOOK HER LIFE ALSO, CUZ OF BULLYS SO i CAN REALTE TO IT. yOU'RE REALLY GOOD, KEEP WRITING!! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    Wow! This was heartbreaking. Again had no idea where this would end. I love how the end ties in with everything else. Powerful read. Keep up the great job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wow! This is reallt deep. something that needs to be taught from the time children first start school The effects that arise from torment are very ugly. Great write Becca. You did a really good job on this.

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    It's a good try, there could be some changes somewhere, but its really good, i liked how you started off, but the flow got lost somewhere though, but good try.