Comments : My hearts mistakes

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    It's been along time nice to see you back writing! This poem is so true! I can relate it's hard to move on sometimes easier said than done. It takes time and after you are able to let go you will feel so much beter! Great write! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I can identify with this one. Very well done. Heartfelt. Lovely.

    "I just have to take it as it comes
    get up when i fall"

    That's right. Just pick yourself up after you fall. Never give up.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by David Paul

    Love it. Love it love it love it. I love your stuff. I've read some of your other stuff and you have quite a talent. Good Job. kilman = David B. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee

    Great poem, and nice wording. Very heartfelt and honest. Keep up the good work.

    Take care,
    Renee

  • 18 years ago

    by xAmx

    Wow, I love this poem awhole lot. You got some real talent. Keep it up! :) ~B

  • 18 years ago

    by LindaPham

    excellent poem great job

  • 18 years ago

    by lorna westwick

    wicked i love this poem and the last line 'get up when i fall' is so true thanks i was depressed im feeling kind of happy now,

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Can easily relate!! you did a very great job of writing this and was very creative in it too!! I loved it!! keep up the awesome work! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie

    Good!realy good!! i am giving u a 5/5