this is a poem about eyes, isnt it? very original. for that, 5/5 great job

that would be correct, Carmen. thank you.

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very very very good i loved it.. i like the way you described everything..5/5

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much love
shannon

Wow not many people would take the time to brake apart something so ordinary. Very original. 5/5

And I agree that an individual life should have a meaning...but not life itself.Someone should believe in something, but people should not stress about the WHY??? questions that no one has an answer for.

This poem seems to be left to interpretation... i like that..... there are so many thigs/people that could be expressed through this poem