hey, u sent me a email and told me to check out ur new poem and here i am lol. i like it alot, i love how you make the story the same cuz if you made it super diffrent i would get kinda confused. i like it alot and i think that it has EXCELLENT format. i think you could be the next most famous poet ever. best of wishes!
5/5

savannah

holy crap! that's great! i love that you have a first edition and second! that brings the poetry more to life! i'm in awe! great topid and great writing! ur so freakin awesome!!
oh.. 5/5
love always,
Abcede :P

You just basically wrote what you did in the first poem but you changed it around a bit. It's still good though.

Hey everyone, a few people have noticed that the two poems are very similar. Well that was my intent. I was trying to show the female perspective on what happened. I wanted to show both sides, like in Good Sex/Bad Sex. I just thought people would find it interesting, thats all.

excellent second addition, althogh there are a few spelling mistakes. made me tear up yet again. i still think your first one was a bit better. keep up the good work
~*Freak*~

wow this poem rocks the first one it is such a excellent poem keep it up

WOW!!!

that was awesome writing... keep it up.

-kk-

wow i really enjoyed your poem:) Keep rocking and check some of mine out some time:)
Love Koo \m/(><)\m/

hey man em sorry i got all confused :) but this rocked its similer(sp?) to the other one but that makes it interesting :) loved it x)

great poem it's very sad what love can make people do...... good job

this is a good poem

both were really well writen.... from each point of view.... i think you done a great job on them both..... they were very deep and i could actually feel the pain..... i enjoyed reading this and the other.....

loved it

its so amazing how u write from different points of view. you make it where your poems are read like stories and its so cool how you do that. i read this one and like the other one i felt it.

thats really good ur awesome at writing
liz

wow i really love how you have both sides of the death... people if u haven't read the first one please do it's really great also..
LOTS OF LUV
SHAWNDA

Wow.. thats so good!

I am so in love with both of these poems. it's the perfect love story with the worst possible ending. if i could give this a ten out of ten i would. keep writing because you inspire me. thanx