Stupid Shit

by Shy   Jun 30, 2005


Yo think yo n luv,
Bi+ch go clear yo head,
he\'s a jerk,
sent from hell.
He\'s conceded.
Save yoself from his spell.
everytime he falls,
he pulls yo down.
Girl get off his balls.
he treats yo like shit.
Stop followin like a dog,
and ridin his d!(k.
yo gotta life,
and he\'s not it!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    lol very straight forward..i kinda like it...lol...nice job...luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    haha awesome poem, i thought it was funny!

  • 18 years ago

    by gasping for air

    hun, you could make this better... if youw ant it to be like a rap, make it longer, add some stuff to it... but you do have a chill topic here... keep it up!
    amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by BloodScars

    i agree with jen... this is a really good poem and it gets right down to the point...good work
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lushed

    whoever gave this piece a one is an idoit and obviously doesnt understand writing.
    you used the profanity so strongly that it made your point so clear.
    and since you dont use it often in your other work, it just exemplifies the meaning.
    you did a great job,
    most people cant get the porfanity thing to work, but you pulled it off
    i applaud you.
    5/5

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