Great poem.. I voted a 5 for this one.. Please check out my poem "Endless Love" it would mean a lot to me.. thanks!

sad but good poem!

Excellent 5/5 ..... its so intense & touching... pls vote & comment on my poem "murder or suicide"

Great! It's very well written!

WOw ! eXceLLent JoB !! hUgz!

Damn...I LIKE THAT!!
well written..keep writeing 5/5
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True it is a sad poem but I could not reach and feel these emotions. It was as though I was reading but not taking a part in your writing. The structure was great, nothing felt forced, and your descriptions were really written, especially your first stanza. I would suggest justwriting more emotional words to connect with the reader.

Wow, excellent poem. I really enjoyed it.

Wow- your last two stanza's are the best-there really worded great too.

october xx

Ditto.

Wow i really liek this poem... wow i can totally realte so much to this.. keep up da good work : )