Comments : My lies,my life, my suicide

  • 12 years ago

    by Kim

    suicide isn't going to solve anything. trust me. i've been there b4

  • 12 years ago

    by Kim

    suicide isn't going to solve anything. trust me. i've been there b4

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda

    wow...that's really sad, i understand that you got raped and were pregnant at 15, have you had the baby yet?? You said you have cancer...do you really...if so, i'm terribly sorry..that's something many battle, and cannot live with, it's a fact...and i'm sorry!! If you love your family so much, why do you wish to follow through with suicide, when it'll make the lives of your family worse?? you know it plays with peoples minds...and sometimes other's commit suicide, because of their loss of a friend or family member...no matter your bad decisions...no matter your secrets, your family will always love you!!! You don't have to use my advice, you don't even have to acknowledge it...but i know what it feels like to lose someone close to you...it hurts!! you can't even go a day with out thinking about that person...and that's all you think about....is the good times..and it makes people think that it's their faults!! Don't do it...you're an amazing poet...and i'll bet you'd have a wonderful life ahead of you...if you just change your attitude towards life, around!! Please...remember your family before your knife!!
    i'll keep you in my prayers...w/b if you will
    Thank you
    --Manda--

  • 12 years ago

    by Sparklylipgloss

    Ok listen here girly-
    how about no?! That is a very well written poem, but its not sending out a good message. You have a lot more going for you then sucide. Your family will not frown they will cry, if you commit sucide, just know that noone out there is like you, you are your own person, killing yourself, will not solve a thing...! No one cant take your place and you need to other stand that..trust me..dont regret anything that makes you smile, but dont smile on something that your smiling for the wrong reasons...in the quiet, love is reaching, its mine to hold, be still and know that, far beyond the road is reaching, remember god loves you...(god loves you by:jaci valseaquae)

    Signed: Lyz

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    *tear, tear, tear*, WOw hun I am So0o0 sorry... I mean gosh I had two tears on each cheek by the end of this! Everyone else has said what I wanted to say, but let me tell you girl, if anything, JESUS is your answer, before you go through with suicide (PLEASE DONT), pray about it please! It honostly is not your time to go. I know it may be so hard being pregnant at 15 girl, and having cancer but if you just BELIEVE, you will have someone already by your side, God. If you just pray about it I promise you it will be better. DO IT PLEASE!! May God be with you and I hope you hang in there
    With Love,
    ~Chelsey~

  • 12 years ago

    by Nikki D. Erotica

    oh my god i love it. it feels like ive been through the same sh*t. thats a very beautiful poem <3 ~~Nikki

  • 12 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    this is so sad
    i hope you can stay strong and find a way to tell your parents the truth instead of killing yourself, dont assume you know how they will react...
    good poem though

  • 12 years ago

    by tabithaa

    that was flipping awesome...

  • 12 years ago

    by Destinys Pain

    u have got to tell me evwything in like person...or by email is okie...soo sad ='(

  • 12 years ago

    by ~*G@M3 0V3R*~

    sorry that stuff had to happen to u if you got raped it shouldnt b ur fault because he forced u to do somethin u didnt want to do well RIP girl

    love always,
    coryminem

    RIP RIP RIP RIP RIP RIP

  • 12 years ago

    by Kalie

    hey that was really awesome... do u really have cancer or were just trying to rhyme.. if u want u can check out some of my poems

    but hey im out
    kalie

  • 12 years ago

    by Marissa Methanphetamine

    sad it made me cry a bit... would say more but my mom is makin me get off :( ♥ marissa

  • 12 years ago

    by heartofcold

    love your poem it was very long though...

  • 12 years ago

    by Liz

    that seoriously made me cry... i love your poem!! keep writing!

  • 12 years ago

    by BrOkEn DrEaMs14

    thats really sad im cryin u r really talented

  • 12 years ago

    by Kel

    i loved ur poem...i agree with the ppl about....suicide is not the aswer...i have been there b4..i would have regret comitting suicide

  • 12 years ago

    by Priscylla

    powerful, awesome, amazing.... just wow 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by .:.:.aidanG.:.:.

    OMG! This poem is so touching... I almost cried. OMG OMG OMG!! It was soooo good!! 5/5! Hope everything gets better hun!

    ~AidanG~

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    Omg

  • 12 years ago

    by MaX~

    Beautiful, one of the best poems ive read this month, amazing, keep writting strong